The Tongues of Men

IconA novel by Gabriel Smy

Franzen vs Coelho on digital books


Two authors with very different attitudes to literature online spoke up recently. Jonathan Franzen defended the physical object of the book at a festival in Colombia:

When I read a book, I'm handling a specific object in a specific time and place. The fact that when I take the book off the shelf it still says the same thing – that's reassuring. Someone worked really hard to make the language just right, just the way they wanted it. They were so sure of it that they printed it in ink, on paper. A screen always feels like we could delete that, change that, move it around. So for a literature-crazed person like me, it's just not permanent enough.

He seems to be conflating form with content. Books are lovely. Almost sacred. I still mostly read physical books. Ebooks will never compete with the sensual, material experience of a book, nor the ability to get a sense of the whole book by flicking through its pages and scanning endings and beginnings. That's why I think the idea of free electronic version for everyone, alongside a premium special edition paper version for fans, might be a sustainable future route for fiction.

But it’s hard to see Franzen’s comments as much more than pure conservatism. So he doesn't like screens. He should see how my one-year-old moves physical books around. That would make him weep. Pages of T.S. Eliot studded with raisins and stuffed under the sofa.

Ebooks, and the devices through which we access them, are going to continue to develop, absorbing all the advice and habits of people who love reading, who love books; they are going to become even more brilliant for reading and browsing, for sharing and annotating, for adapting to our quirks and preferences. That’s the beauty of the digital arena: openness, connection, and rapid evolution.

Franzen is wrong. There might be “a trillion bits of distracting noise” on the Internet, but that does not mean, “all the real things, the authentic things, the honest things, are dying off.” (These are lines he gives to Walter Berglund in Freedom). There might be a terribly low signal to noise ratio on the Internet but there is reality and authenticity if you know where to look.

Take Paulo Coelho for example. The Brazilian author recently made headlines by advocating online piracy. It’s hardly surprising – when a pirated Russian edition of The Alchemist was posted online, it opened up the market and contributed to the sale of more than 12 million copies. That’s because:

When you’ve eaten an orange, you have to go back to the shop to buy another.

It’s not just his attitude towards sharing his writing freely that is polar opposite to writers like Franzen. He also blogs several times a week, posting videos and links and smart competitions that connect him to his fans and have contributed to him having more than 3 million followers on Twitter.

He uses the opportunities that the Internet age has thrown up to connect generously with people and spread his work. Readers are lapping it up.

I have a tiny bit of sympathy for Franzen. I wonder sometimes how the good stuff is ever going to rise to the surface in the rubbish-infested oceans of the Internet. It was much simpler taking a book off the library shelf. But unless the best writers embrace ways to publish and share their work online, they are part of the problem. Coelho is doing it better than most. I’m with Paulo.

 
 

In search of an alternative chunk


Henry Miller's writing commandments got me thinking again about how to motivate oneself to write.

Towards the end of the first draft I established a good system. The weekly word target was no good – invariably leading to 3 days of doing very little followed by  desperate, guilty cramming on Thursday and Friday. I started aiming for a daily word target instead, but with a twist.

A simple daily goal was not that helpful. Firstly, I would leave it late in the day to try and reach it, wasting at least the morning. And if the going was hard, I would think never mind, I'll just make up the words tomorrow. Then the pressure would be on the following day to write even more, and the cumulative effect would make the past two days just as scrambling as before.

So the twist was this: the daily goal was 1500 words, and as soon as I wrote the 1500th word I could pack up and do whatever I liked with the rest of my day.

It was a daily reward for progress. Some days I hit the target by mid afternoon and smugly went off alone to the shops, or turned up at the school to surprise the boys by picking them up. Other days I kept on writing past the limit because I was in the zone. On tougher days I might labour up to the last minute, or not manage to hit the target at all. The beauty of the system was that the words did not stack up throughout the week: if I missed the goal one day, I'd just start afresh the next.

Henry Miller also had fresh start concept: 'Discard the Program when you feel like it — but go back to it the next day'.

Something about the daily, reward-driven but guilt-free chunk of work helped me to finally to finish a first draft. I discovered too that freedom is my favourite reward: I relish the prospect of free time in which I can do anything I choose, rather than any one favourite activity.

But this formula doesn't work for the second draft. It doesn't work because the work can't be quantified in as simple a term as a word count. I have a terrifyingly long list of changes I want to make to the book, of things I need to check for, new scenes to add in and others to delete. I have extra research to do. I want to overhaul the speech of some of the characters. I need to zoom in on words and phrases as well as stand back to see if the whole works as a story.

I'm overwhelmed. On any one day don't know where to start.

Miller says: 'Work on one thing at a time until finished,' which is good for focus, but I never know how long each task is going to take, or how entangled it is with others. I don't know how to turn a task that I start into a chunk that I can reward myself for completing.

He also says, 'when you can't create you can work', which reminds me of something Eric Griffiths once told me. He said, 'there is no such thing as study; there is only work'. Forget the wall you have to build; simply lift up the next brick and put it on top of the others.

Perhaps then I need to work in chunks of time, like the Pomodoro technique. Anthony Trollope used to write 3 hours a day, every day. Perhaps I should set myself a target in hours that allows for some free time at the end of the day if I get on with it quickly enough.

Whatever I do, I need to try it fast. I feel like I'm sinking in the mire.